New Release: Doom

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GreyGhost
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Re: WIP: Doom

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Honestly, just changing the Aux. color from that nasty purple-blue to orange makes the picture look very good. That's ctrl-4 in minipaint.
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Re: WIP: Doom

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Here, new progress. Now with more Doomguy.
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Re: WIP: Doom

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His face is not a blob!

Looks good. The letters and gun look fine, although I think some bits of him that were in shadow before are too bright, and you loose the effect of the muzzle flash.
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Re: WIP: Doom

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Looking good so far!
If there was some way to make his eyes white it would help.
And perhaps remove the line on the helmet that looks like a mouth...
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Re: WIP: Doom

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Personally, I think its silly to see the white in the eyes behind a visor. I like the previous way better...
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@Exin: your last image is OK for the mouth now, but I agree that you should keep the eyes dark (too many artists here, isn't it annoying? :P).
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Re: WIP: Doom

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You're right, they are too bright :)
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Re: WIP: Doom

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Like the face with the changes. A softer transition from black->blue, left to right in the letters would look good. I still think things like his back leg and shoulder look a little bright. I like the new look of the floating demon. His gun needs to pop from his belt more.
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Re: WIP: Doom

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Here's another one. Now I'm working on the background.
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Great work Pixelmeister :-)

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Re: WIP: Doom

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You're getting rid of all the black! Nooooo!

The lower gun looks better, but the hand just looks like it's open, rather than holding it.
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Re: WIP: Doom

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Here's a funny youtube review of the game:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVQcuiZpRsg
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Re: WIP: Doom

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My clip is nearing 30K views! :)
Learning all the time... :)
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Re: WIP: Doom

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Cool, I hadn't seen that review.
Shame he didn't get to level 2!
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Re: WIP: Doom

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I will finish as soon as i get my life in order again D:
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